Sport
My favorite sport is soccer but I don't like basketball. I play soccer ever Friday. I think it is popular because the soccer games the first in world now. I think beginning the soccer in 1365. Maybe the people need play soccer 45% of world. I need fires techart scanned trousers sport finally boots sport. I like this sport because it is a good and fun. I think people like this sport because fun.
make sense in this sentence ( Maybe the people need play soccer 45% of world.)
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ReplyDeleteLook at this part. "because the soccer games the first in world now." Do you see a verb here? Please include a verb. The meaning is not clear to me.
ReplyDeleteI like your paragraph put I think you have some mistake when you wrote { I play soccer ever friday} I think you can say {I play soccer every friday } and {because fun}.{for fun}
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