My Plan to New York
I want to visit New York because it is beautiful. New York it's a big city. Maybe I will visit next month. I think I will go New York by fly. I want to go New York of reasons famous person big buildings and many activities such as, Times Square and Status of Liberty. Maybe I will stay just one week. I love New York so much. New York city is one of the cities that I hope visit soon.
Why did you use two different font styles? Look at the last two sentences. Please use "New Times and Roman."
ReplyDeleteFrom your paragraph I think New York is very exciting. Are Times Square and status of liberty modern place?
ReplyDeletePlease look at this sentence: I will go New York by fly.
ReplyDeleteYou can say "by plane", not "by fly."
ok miss Sunyung thank you for that
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