Sunday, May 25, 2014

My  Vacation In France
I want to visit France because it is pretty city.I wiii travel there by airplane in the morning.Iwant to go 
shopping in the evening.I want to see the Eiffel tower.It is big cite.It has beautiful places.The wather is nice in France.Iwill stay in France for one week.It has prtty museums.I want to  see the sea.I like France because it has many fun things to do.
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7 comments:

  1. SunyungMay 25, 2014 at 4:22 PM

    Is there a reason you did not keep the deadline for posting your paragraph? Because you were late, you lost 4 points. Also, please write from LEFT to RIGHT, NOT FROM RIGHT TO LEFT. You should change the page setup and fix this problem.

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  2. UnknownMay 25, 2014 at 6:00 PM

    Hi ..
    You have some mistake. In second sentence is spall. Should make space after period.Your paragraph is good. I hope that you can go to France.

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  3. UnknownMay 25, 2014 at 6:05 PM

    Also,you have some mistake in format.

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  4. UnknownMay 25, 2014 at 6:05 PM

    Also,you have some mistake in format.

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  5. UnknownMay 26, 2014 at 2:46 PM

    Hi Entesar, you have a wrong spelling mistake. you should write will not wiii and thank you.

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  6. UnknownMay 28, 2014 at 8:58 PM

    Your paragraph it's so good
    And you have same mistakes but Samar she told you

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