Thursday, May 29, 2014
Soccer
My favorite sport is soccer. Soccer has a popular because it is first sport in the world. I think soccer has 200 years ago. every world needed the soccer. You need to play soccer two teams each team has twelve player , rule , court and ball. I like it because it has interesting than the world. General opinion to soccer I think very well.
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Hi Eid!
ReplyDeleteYou need to fix mistakes.
First, in the sentence
- every world needed the soccer - 1 word will need a big letter. And I think this sentence is not good. Word "needed" can to change "likes".
- you need to put comma after last letter, not space in the sentence
You need to play soccer two teams each team has twelve player , rule , court and ball.
- your title must be in the center
Finally, you have not grammar mistake. Do you sure about 12 players? I think 11.
Good luck!
Hi Eid,
ReplyDeleteevery world need the soccer, a big letter because frist sentens.
Thanks
Inna and Maha, good comments! Eid, please look at these two ladies' comments and fix your mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThank you for Inna and Maha .. I ill fix my mistakes
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ReplyDeleteMy favorite sport is Soccer. Soccer has a popular because it is first sport in the world. I think Soccer has 200 years ago. every world likes the Soccer. You need to play Soccer two teams each team has twelve player , rule , court and ball. I like it because it has interesting than the world. General opinion to Soccer I think very well.