Soccer
My favorite sport is soccer. It is so popular because it is so exiting. Many people like to watch soccer games. It is very old sport. Every each team need 11 players on a field. If you want to play soccer, you need good field, soccer clothes, soccer ball and soccer shoes. Sometimes I play on weekends. I like to watch soccer games because it has many exiting cups. Such as, world cup is coming soon. I don't like some players and some teams. Soccer is a good sport if you want to play or watch. Soccer is my life.
My favorite sport is soccer. It is so popular because it is so exiting. Many people like to watch soccer games. It is very old sport. Every each team need 11 players on a field. If you want to play soccer, you need good field, soccer clothes, soccer ball and soccer shoes. Sometimes I play on weekends. I like to watch soccer games because it has many exiting cups. Such as, world cup is coming soon. I don't like some players and some teams. Soccer is a good sport if you want to play or watch. Soccer is my life.
Hi Aymann. Your paragraph is very good, but In the third sentence you repeat word "soccer" many times, you can use it once like this" you need good field, soccer clothes, ball and shoes."
ReplyDeleteKhaled made good comments. Look at this sentence.
ReplyDelete"Every each team need 11 players on a field."
There is a mistake in 3rd person singular form. What is the correct verb form, need or needs?
Thank you Khaled and Sun
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