Friday, May 23, 2014

                                           
                              Florida
I like to visit Florida. I want to visit it in the winter because the weather is very beautiful .I need to.  visit Florida by fly. I want to visit it for many reasons :the weather is nice and Florida has many   famous place and it has an nice beach.I can do to swim in the beach and eat seafood.I want to stay . about 10days.Florida is tourist city
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6 comments:

  1. SunyungMay 24, 2014 at 5:58 AM

    Please check your punctuation use. There are mistakes in punctuation.

    .I need to. visit Florida by fly.

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  2. UnknownMay 25, 2014 at 5:15 AM

    Hi Maha!
    I think you need to fix last sentens. There is not concluding sentens.

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  3. MahaMay 26, 2014 at 2:08 PM

    I am sorrry.
    I need to visit Florida by airport.
    Thank you .

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  4. MahaMay 26, 2014 at 2:11 PM

    I like to visit Florida. I want to visit it in the winter because the weather is very beautiful .I need to visit Florida by airport. I want to visit it for many reasons :the weather is nice and Florida has many famous place and it has an nice beach.I can do to swim in the beach and eat seafood.I want to stay about 10days.Florida is tourist city.

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  5. UnknownMay 27, 2014 at 8:02 PM

    Hi Maha ..
    I think beach for Florida it is very nice .

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  6. UnknownMay 30, 2014 at 12:57 PM

    Hi mahha
    I think you have one mistake in last sentence because you take space after point

    good luck ..

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