Wednesday, May 28, 2014


Favorite sport

       My favorite sport is a racing car. It has a lot of fun and activity. Little people like this sport because it's a very dangers when we drive the car to high speed. The car racing its the old sport in my country. My country team is a very big in the world. I have two cars for the racing. I love the sport of my brother because he was practice this sport. I love this sport and I'm very happy when the drive car.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Khaled. I think you have two small mistake when you said ''its'' instead of ''it's'' and the second was '' I love the sport of my brother'' you can say ''my brother taught me this sport''.

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  2. Hi Khaled! I think, we talked about your paragraph, so try to change the mistakes. If you want to talk about your paragraph, tell me please.

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