Friday, June 13, 2014

My Future dream

                                                            My Future dream



     My future dream is to became a Engineer. First, I will take my education in 8 years. Next, I am going to study depend on my self. Then, I will make some money. After, I will be a good Engineer. I will study Engineering after finish IEP. After that, I will take a bachelor grade and master grade. Finally, I will not take another major. chemical Engineering is important tome because it is difficult.

4 comments:

  1. Eid, I hope your dream will come true.
    Your concluding sentence is not clear. What do you mean by "tome"?
    "chemical Engineering is important tome because it is difficult." Please look at the topic sentence and tie it with it.

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  2. Hi Eid! It is a good paragraph and I agree with our teacher.

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  3. My Future dream



    My future dream is to became a Engineer. First, I will take my education in 8 years. Next, I am going to study depend on my self. Then, I will make some money. After, I will be a good Engineer. I will study Engineering after finish IEP. After that, I will take a bachelor grade and master grade. Finally, I will not take another major. chemical Engineering is important major because it is difficult.

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