Wednesday, June 4, 2014


My Grandfather

I love my grandfather because he was very great. His name was Soliman. He was a teacher for about 20 years. He retired when he left his job. My life was good and fun with my grandfather, but he died. I was sad when he died. My grandfather was an important person to me.

1 comment:

  1. Hi .
    you write a good paragraph, but you have one mistake. Look at this sentence:He was a teacher for about 20 years. You should write : He was a teacher for about 20 years ago.
    Also, you write a good topic sentence and conclusion sentence.

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