tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post1796809091902203693..comments2023-03-29T06:08:05.953-07:00Comments on IEP GW2 SUA14: My Future dream Sunyunghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-77221549553448485102014-06-16T22:37:06.286-07:002014-06-16T22:37:06.286-07:00 ... My Future dream <br /><br /><br /><br /> My future dream is to became a Engineer. First, I will take my education in 8 years. Next, I am going to study depend on my self. Then, I will make some money. After, I will be a good Engineer. I will study Engineering after finish IEP. After that, I will take a bachelor grade and master grade. Finally, I will not take another major. chemical Engineering is important major because it is difficult. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06268199199669157762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-30064076130089493242014-06-16T22:36:39.950-07:002014-06-16T22:36:39.950-07:00I'm sorry I have mistake ..I'm sorry I have mistake ..<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06268199199669157762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-91405409382421886252014-06-14T10:13:54.859-07:002014-06-14T10:13:54.859-07:00Hi Eid! It is a good paragraph and I agree with ou...Hi Eid! It is a good paragraph and I agree with our teacher. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02550734080166323331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-85874357462426969662014-06-14T04:21:25.737-07:002014-06-14T04:21:25.737-07:00Eid, I hope your dream will come true.
Your concl...Eid, I hope your dream will come true. <br />Your concluding sentence is not clear. What do you mean by "tome"?<br />"chemical Engineering is important tome because it is difficult." Please look at the topic sentence and tie it with it.Sunyunghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.com