tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post7337134102705539620..comments2023-03-29T06:08:05.953-07:00Comments on IEP GW2 SUA14: Sunyunghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-19757830265790071922014-06-06T23:23:19.923-07:002014-06-06T23:23:19.923-07:00Hi .
you write a good paragraph, but you have one ...Hi .<br />you write a good paragraph, but you have one mistake. Look at this sentence:He was a teacher for about 20 years. You should write : He was a teacher for about 20 years ago.<br />Also, you write a good topic sentence and conclusion sentence. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10861820040037686507noreply@blogger.com