Thursday, June 5, 2014

My Teacher

      I liked my teacher because he was a very good teacher. His neam is Ted. He was 40 years old. He taught me who I can say new words. He was important for me. He was smart, and he was funny. He did not like noise, but he liked talking in his classes very much. He taught me in last year. Ted was a better teacher for me.

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  1. Hi Aymann, your paragraph is good but you have some mistakes.
    1- His neam is Ted. (name).
    2- He was 40 years old. (He has 40 years old).
    3- He taught me who I can say new words. (He taught me how I can say new words).
    4- Ted was a better teacher for me. (Ted was a best teacher for me).

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  2. Hi khald, i think your paragraph is good, bot you have some mistake, khald told you every think.

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  3. He had because the senates is in the past

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  4. I use better because he was better than all another teachers

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  5. Good comments, Khaled! And it's good that Aymann knows specific reasons why he used certain words.

    My comments:
    1. He was 40 years old. (correct sentence)
    2. Ted was a better teacher than others. Or you can say: Ted was the best teacher for me. Your original sentence does not sound natural, although it is grammatically correct.

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