Wednesday, June 4, 2014

My important brother
       My brother was important to me because he learned me the English language. Now I'm stady in U.S. In the 2008 my brother went to U.S. He studied to major but now he was working in my country. I learned a lot of him because you gave me books and many papers for the langue. In 2013 I came to U.S to attend the graduation for my brother but I could not stay too long time. I love my brother and I miss you now.  

5 comments:

  1. Hi Khaled! I like your paragraph, but in second senates you have mistake(Now I'm studying in the U.S., but In 2008 my brother went to the U.S.)

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  2. Hi khald, i think you have some mistake when you say in the first senates ``Now I'm stady in U.S. In the`` i think you must say ``Now I`m studying at U.S. In the``.

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  3. You have a very good brother, Khaled! Please look at this part.

    "but now he was working in my country." "now" is a present time indicator. You should use simple present, not simple past here.

    There are more mistakes in your paragraph. Aymann and Abdulrahman, can you find more mistakes? For example, there is one mistake in this sentence.

    "I love my brother and I miss you now."

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  4. My brother was important to me because he learned me the English language.
    My brother was important to me because he taught me the English language

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