Sunday, June 15, 2014

                              My future dream
   My future dream is to be a teacher in a University in my country.

 First, I will study all  of the  IEP in the  University of Dayton.

Then, when I finish the IEP in the University of Dayton I will study 

for my Masters in the University of Dayton. My major will be ECE.

 Next, I will go to my country because I will be a teacher in the 

University in my country. Then, I will be a teacher but my sister 

will be a nurse. Next, I will not be a nurse. Then, I will get a good 

life in the future. Finally, I will become a good teacher in the future

 in my country because I will study and work hard in America.

3 comments:

  1. Great, Entesar!
    But you used "then" too many times. It's better to use "then" 1-2 times. So you don't have to use an ordering word for every sentence.

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  2. I think a good paragraph .
    Thanks,

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  3. I think a good paragraph .
    Thanks,

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