Sunday, June 15, 2014

My Great Plan

    I will change my profession because next 3 years I am going to live in the U.S.. First, I will finish IEP. Second, I will practice on English because I am going to talk more time. I want to complete my experience and will teach classes about Media. I hope in 1 year I will talk on English not worst than on my native language. Finally, I will become a good teacher in U. S. I don't sure it will be fast, but I will work hard for my Great Plan.  
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  1. SunyungJune 15, 2014 at 6:54 PM

    Wonderful plan!
    Inna, there is a mistake in time expression. Please look at this part: "because next 3 years I am going to live in the U.S." You can say, "in the next 3 years" or "in 3 years."

    Also, please use the ordering words correctly: first, next, then, after that, finally. You should use these words.

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  2. UnknownJune 16, 2014 at 1:17 PM

    ok, thank you Sunyung!

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  3. UnknownJune 16, 2014 at 1:59 PM

    Hi Inna you have a good paragraph
    Actually you have some mistak you forgot the (first, next, than, after that, finally)

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  4. UnknownJune 16, 2014 at 5:30 PM

    Hi Inna.
    I like your plan in the future I hope all your dreams come true.

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  5. UnknownJune 16, 2014 at 8:29 PM

    Thanks Samar! I hope my dream will become a really life.

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