My grand father was an important person to me because he was great. He was born in Saudi Arabia in 1933. His name is Salem. He did not have job. Hi like the desert, but he did not like the city. He died 11 years ago. He was 80 years old before died.
My grand father was an important person to me because he was great. He was born in Saudi Arabia in 1933. His name is Salem. He did not have job. Hi like the desert, but he did not like the city. He died 11 years ago. He was 80 years old before died. Finally I missed him.
Eid, can you write a better concluding sentence? Your topic sentence and concluding sentence should have the same idea. Do you think "Finally I missed him" is the same as "My grandfather was an important person to me..."?
Hi Eid
ReplyDeleteI think the three sentens His name was Salem . Because the past.
Thanks
Hi Maha
ReplyDeleteI think both is correct
thank you
Hi Eid!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Maha.
And I don't see your concluding sentence.
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My grand father was an important person to me because he was great. He was born in Saudi Arabia in 1933. His name is Salem. He did not have job. Hi like the desert, but he did not like the city. He died 11 years ago. He was 80 years old before died. Finally I missed him.
Eid, can you write a better concluding sentence? Your topic sentence and concluding sentence should have the same idea. Do you think "Finally I missed him" is the same as "My grandfather was an important person to me..."?
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