My Grandfather
My grandfather was an important person
in my life because he was very fun. He died when he was about 90 years old. He
worked in a famous company. He was born in Saudi Arabia. He helped me in my
study when I was young. I told him all
my secrets because he understands me. I lived with him before fifteen years
ago. I did not see him since seven years ago. I missed him so much, but I can
never forget him. He was and still the most important person to me.
This is a good paragraph, but in the last sentence you should write the word is after the word still.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good paragraph, but in the last sentence you should write the word is after the word still.
ReplyDeleteHi good job Samar you have a good paragraph, but in my opinion you should write
ReplyDelete[ I can't forget him ]
And you write two space, but your good choice.
You had a good grandfather!
ReplyDeleteLook at this part: "I lived with him before fifteen years ago." You don't need "before" here. Please use a past time indicator, "fifteen years ago."