My future dream
because I will study and work
hard in America.
My future dream is to be a teacher in a University in my
country.
First, I will
study all of the IEP in the University of Dayton. Then,
when I finish the IEP in the University of Dayton
I will study for my Masters
in the University of Dayton. My major will
be ECE. Next, I will go
to my
country because
I will be a teacher in the University in my country.
Then, I will be a teacher but my sister
will be a nurse. Next, I will not
be a nurse. Then, I will get a good life in the future. Finally,
I
will become a good teacher
in the future in my country
This is a great plan! I'm sure you'll be a good teacher in the future.
ReplyDeleteThere are some mistakes in the future tense. For example, look at this part: "I will teacher in University my country."
You can say: " I will be a teacher in University in my country." There are similar mistakes in your paragraph. Please fix them.
Hi Entesar. This is a good paragraph, but you have some mistake when said {My future dream is teacher} you can writ {My future dream is to become a teacher } and {I will teacher but my sister will nurse} you can writ {I will be a teacher, but my sister will be a nurse}.
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