My future dream
My future dream is to become a good civil Engineer. First, I will take my education. Next, I am going to study in a different country and finish my degree in 3 years. Then , I will make some many. I will not stay in different country. when I study ,but I am going to go back in my country. Finally, I will make a big building after I finish my study. I hope to do all these things.
Tofieg, it's strange that your group members didn't give you comments. Anyway, you have a great plan!
ReplyDeletePlease look at this sentence:
"I will not stay in different country. when I study ,but I am going to go back in my country." Don't put a period (.) before "when I study." This sentence is still not very clear in meaning.