Tuesday, June 3, 2014


Maha ALjedani

SunySung Song

WG2

6l3l2014

Assignment#3



 My grandmother
        My grandmother name was Fatima. She was very important person for me because she went to school with me every day and she was always advise me. She was born in Jeddah. She had one boy and two girls. She did not have a job. She was 70 years old ,but she dead two years ago. I loved her so much.


        
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4 comments:

  1. UnknownJune 3, 2014 at 10:34 PM

    Hi Maha ..

    In second sentence I think if you write ( she went with me to my school ) I think this is better, but I think this not big mistake .

    good job .

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  2. MahaJune 4, 2014 at 4:00 PM

    Thanks Eid

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  3. UnknownJune 4, 2014 at 9:24 PM

    Hi Maha!
    Perhaps you could change your last sentence. As far as I think it isn't a good concluding sentence.

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  4. SunyungJune 7, 2014 at 8:18 AM

    You had a wonderful grandmother!
    Look at this part:
    "but she dead two years ago." "dead" is an adjective. Please use a verb "die". The past form of "die" is "died."

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