My future dream
My future dream is to be a teacher in a University in my
country.
First, I will
study all of the IEP in the University of Dayton.
Then, when I finish the IEP in the University of Dayton I will study
for my Masters in the University of Dayton. My major will be ECE.
Next, I will go to my country because I will be a teacher in the
University in my country. Then, I will be a teacher but my sister
will be a nurse. Next, I will not be a nurse. Then, I will get a good
life in the future. Finally, I will become a good teacher in the future
in my country because I will study and work hard in America.
Then, when I finish the IEP in the University of Dayton I will study
for my Masters in the University of Dayton. My major will be ECE.
Next, I will go to my country because I will be a teacher in the
University in my country. Then, I will be a teacher but my sister
will be a nurse. Next, I will not be a nurse. Then, I will get a good
life in the future. Finally, I will become a good teacher in the future
in my country because I will study and work hard in America.
Great, Entesar!
ReplyDeleteBut you used "then" too many times. It's better to use "then" 1-2 times. So you don't have to use an ordering word for every sentence.
I think a good paragraph .
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I think a good paragraph .
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