The basketball in my life
My favorite sport it is a basketball because my father many years likes and plays this game. I had a more time in gym with my dad when I was a small girl. As far as I know the basketball invented more than 100 years ago in USA. Now this game very popular in the whole world and in my country too. The basketball is a game of team. Usually two teams play basketball and each team has 5 players. All players takes the ball and try to get it in the basket another team. All of players are tall, such as my father is over 7,5 feet tall. I never don't play basketball in professional team because I am a petite woman. Sometimes I play basketball with my father and husband. We had a funny time because basketball is a one of the favorite sport in my family.
Hi Inna ..
ReplyDeleteI think played basketball it is very old and intersting ..
Eid, your comments should be more specific to help Inna. Did you see any mistakes or errors In Inna's paragraph?
DeleteHi Eid!
DeleteLet me know where is your paragraph?
Hi Inna,
ReplyDeleteMy favorite sport it
I thing the first sentence tow subject.
Thanks
Maha, I don't understand you about fist sentence. Do you suggest me will make a two sentence?
DeleteInna, this is a good paragraph. The topic sentence and the concluding sentence seem to have the same idea.
ReplyDeletePlease look at the sentence below. Do you see a verb in this sentence? I do not see a verb.
Now this game very popular in the whole world and in my country too.
Thank you Sanyung! I don't see "is" too and I will correct this mistake.
DeleteHi Inna
ReplyDeleteyour paragraph is beautiful but I think you have one mistake in first sentence .. you can write with out ( it )
good job