Monday, May 26, 2014

My city

                                                                             Florida

       I want visit to Florida because there are a beautiful places. There are Abigail activities.there are a nice restaurants. In Florida you can swim and go to museum and city games. I want to sit in Florida one week. I choose this city because it's  a new place for me. I want go to Florida in Simmer.
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4 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 26, 2014 at 1:39 PM

    Hi.
    You have some mistakes. In first sentence is I want to visit Florida.
    The last sentence is I want to go to Florida in summer.
    I think you use the adjectives very well.
    Good luck.

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  2. UnknownMay 26, 2014 at 2:36 PM

    Hi Mohamad.
    I think you need a good concluding in your paragraph.

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  3. UnknownMay 26, 2014 at 2:37 PM

    Hi Mohamad.
    I think you need a good concluding in your paragraph

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  4. UnknownMay 28, 2014 at 8:52 PM

    Yes, I agree with you thank you for help to me.

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