Hawaii
I want to visit Hawaii. I can go to Hawaii by airplane. I want to
go there because it has many beautiful islands. It has a great ocean. It has a
good weather. I can swim in Pacific ocean and play soccer on beach. The weather
is usually sun and hot. I want to sat one week or more than a week. I will try
to go to Hawaii in this winter. I like Hawaii so much. I hope to visit
Hawaii.
You have a good introductory sentence. But you did not seem to choose 2 adjectives from the adjective list.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Should I choose? I think, it is okay to choose from my mind
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Thank you so much. Have a good weekend to
ReplyDeleteAymann, please follow my directions. Choose 2 adjectives from the adjective list posted on Isidore and use them in your paragraph. If not, you will lose some points.
ReplyDeleteI didn't find it. I don't know where is it?
ReplyDeleteI sent you an email about this. Please read my email carefully next time. Go to the course website (Isidore) and look at "Resources." The file name is "adjectives_writing1." It is posted under "writing assignments."
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