Italy
I want to visit Italy. It is pretty and a big city. I can go by airplane. I want to go there because the weather is very nice. It has delicious food. It has many zoos and museums. I want to walk in the nice weather , after that I want to enjoy by eating delicious food. Next year I want to go to Italy and I want to stay there there three weeks. I hope to visit Italy very much.
You have a good introductory sentence and a good concluding sentence! But you did not seem to choose 2 adjectives from the adjective list.
ReplyDeletethe second senates before big not A. like this It is pretty and big city
ReplyDeleteItaly is not city it is country.
ReplyDeleteSamar, good points!
ReplyDeleteThis sentence has "there" twice.
I want to stay there there three weeks
Sorry, these are Meshal's comments, not Samar's!
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