My dream is London
I like to visit London because it is a one of oldest city in Europe. It’s my biggest dream. I hope next year l will fly to London with my family. I know this trip will be amazing. London has a historical Old Town and many interesting building, because it is a capital of United Kingdom and Queen living in this city right now! I want to take a walk on tourist boat. And at last I hope to visit famous Baker street. I liked to read stories about Sherlock Holmes from Baker Street. I think my trip will be no more one week, however I'm not sure now. I believe next year I will see city of my dream.
You need to separate this. This should be two sentences. Use a period before "however."
ReplyDeleteI think my trip will be no more one week, however I'm not sure now.
Ok, thank you. I will make 2 sentences.
DeleteOverall, this paragraph has a good introductory sentence and a concluding sentence.
ReplyDeleteI like your paragraph .
ReplyDeleteGood luck.
I hope you go to there soon.
I hope too! Thanks Samar!
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ReplyDeleteI hope you to go to london.
Thanks
Hi Inna
ReplyDeleteLondon is beautiful place ..
Hi Inna
ReplyDeleteI think in first sentence if you write ( I would like ) better than ( I like )
good luck ..