tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post2261800370978890803..comments2023-03-29T06:08:05.953-07:00Comments on IEP GW2 SUA14: My important personSunyunghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-81701919294242003502014-06-07T08:02:37.819-07:002014-06-07T08:02:37.819-07:00Hi Tofieg
You have mistake the third sentence
...Hi Tofieg <br /><br />You have mistake the third sentence <br /><br />But he worked in the school before 16 year ago<br /><br />You should write like this: but he worked in the school 16 years ago (cancel before)<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17204204141147024162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-67801243183114995812014-06-07T07:35:58.651-07:002014-06-07T07:35:58.651-07:00Good paragraph, Tofieg! Please look at this part.
...Good paragraph, Tofieg! Please look at this part.<br />"because he was help my family"<br />You have a be verb and an action verb in this clause. Please choose only one verb. In this case, you need to use "helped" (a past form of "help"). <br />Sunyunghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2168073623178479749.post-13497390767748607532014-06-06T23:50:36.895-07:002014-06-06T23:50:36.895-07:00Hi how are you Tofieg your paragraph is very good,...Hi how are you Tofieg your paragraph is very good, but you have a mistake in the first sentence you said just (brother) you should write (my brother).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05124976186336181392noreply@blogger.com